Settling in Zurich - Help please!

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tsomwriter
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Settling in Zurich - Help please! Dec 13, 2020 14:16:57 GMT

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Post by tsomwriter on Dec 13, 2020 14:16:57 GMT

As you all might remember, I started a fanfiction called Settling in Zurich back in October and it's got about four chapters now, but I think I want to include a bit of tension because it's been a bit of a fluff-fest up until now. I want the tension to be between Maria and Georg, but I'm not entirely sure how to go about that or what they could fall out about. They're living with Hede, her husband and their four children now and Maria is just about to find out that she's pregnant. (Just to give you an insight into what's going on) I was wondering if you lovely writers could maybe help me to think of something Maria and Georg could fight/fall out about just to get the ball rolling? Any help would be appreciated! <3

Silver-White-Winters
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Settling in Zurich - Help please! Dec 14, 2020 2:53:50 GMT via mobile

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Post by Silver-White-Winters on Dec 14, 2020 2:53:50 GMT

I have an idea. What if Hede does or says something to Maria, she tells Georg, and Georg takes Hede's side? I know that you're portraying Hede as nice, but maybe she had an outburst of anger and said something that deeply upset Maria? With the stress of two families under one roof, it's plausible for a situation like that to happen.

Or, for some reason, Georg slips into a dark mood and yells at the kids. Makes the little ones cry. Maria confronts him and he says something like "shut up" or " oh, be quiet"

If you ask me, these ideas are plausible. Also, they have different ways you can write them, and various levels of anger that you can add into them. If that makes sense?

Hope this helps a little bit!