Post by tsomwriter on Jun 19, 2021 8:16:49 GMT
Hi guys, I have a bit of a favour to ask you all. A couple of days ago, I posted a chapter for something good entitled Katallage and it's a one-shot about Maria and Georg travelling to Vienna to a party Elsa hosts (post-marriage) and Elsa and Maria have a talk about all that went wrong between them and they make amends in a way.
I'm unsure of what I think of it as I've never really written for Elsa before and so I'm not sure if I wrote her in character or not. Her personality, however, in this one-shot is based on my head canon for her and so I think I ought to let you know my head canon for her before you read so you can understand where I'm coming from really.
My head cannon is:
We see the real side of her at the beginning of the movie and I think she truly would have loved Maria if it hadn’t been the whole love triangle thing. When Maria says “You must be Baroness Schrader” she gives her a genuine smile and when she and the children fall into the water she seems genuinely amused, but stops smiling when Georg looks at her.
Sometimes, I think the old him prevented her from being her real self and so she turned slightly more closed off and cold to impress him because she wanted him to love her and propose to her. When the love triangle thing happens, she does turn against Maria properly and we know that, but I think people who hate Elsa don’t pay attention to the fact we get a glimpse into her true personality when she first arrives in Salzburg.
Also, we have to remember here that she is a widow too and even though she laughs off Max’s comment about her husband dying and leaving her with a fortune, she could have been just as devastated as Georg but is scared of her feelings being known and so she just laughs it off to hide that.
I would love it if some of you could check it out and maybe leave a review or leave a comment here to give me some feedback as I've received very little so far and I'd love to know if there's anywhere I could improve. Thank you! x
P.S. I'm not entirely sure how to add a link to the chapter, but my name on ff.net is TheCaptainAndThePostulant and the chapter is chapter 31!
I'm unsure of what I think of it as I've never really written for Elsa before and so I'm not sure if I wrote her in character or not. Her personality, however, in this one-shot is based on my head canon for her and so I think I ought to let you know my head canon for her before you read so you can understand where I'm coming from really.
My head cannon is:
We see the real side of her at the beginning of the movie and I think she truly would have loved Maria if it hadn’t been the whole love triangle thing. When Maria says “You must be Baroness Schrader” she gives her a genuine smile and when she and the children fall into the water she seems genuinely amused, but stops smiling when Georg looks at her.
Sometimes, I think the old him prevented her from being her real self and so she turned slightly more closed off and cold to impress him because she wanted him to love her and propose to her. When the love triangle thing happens, she does turn against Maria properly and we know that, but I think people who hate Elsa don’t pay attention to the fact we get a glimpse into her true personality when she first arrives in Salzburg.
Also, we have to remember here that she is a widow too and even though she laughs off Max’s comment about her husband dying and leaving her with a fortune, she could have been just as devastated as Georg but is scared of her feelings being known and so she just laughs it off to hide that.
I would love it if some of you could check it out and maybe leave a review or leave a comment here to give me some feedback as I've received very little so far and I'd love to know if there's anywhere I could improve. Thank you! x
P.S. I'm not entirely sure how to add a link to the chapter, but my name on ff.net is TheCaptainAndThePostulant and the chapter is chapter 31!
