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Post by paula on Jan 29, 2014 7:39:04 GMT
There is a new writer on fanfiction.net with the name 34Aigen. The story is good, just wondering if this person is part of our group here.
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Post by lemacd on Jan 29, 2014 7:43:55 GMT
he/she has not revealed it if that is the case. i wonder if the the name refers to the villa, because the vTs lived at 53.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2014 7:43:59 GMT
Not sure but their story was the one I was talking about a few days ago that I thought was just waaayyy too ... um... Descriptive (for lack of a better word).
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Post by utility_singer on Jan 29, 2014 12:20:22 GMT
Vulgar. Vulgar is the better word.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2014 12:24:31 GMT
I was being polite. I don't do confrontations that well. But you are exactly right!
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Post by utility_singer on Jan 29, 2014 13:06:05 GMT
I don't do polite that well, so it's all good.
I am all for using proper terminology for body parts when talking to my doctor, to telling my kids about their bodies, or having a serious medical discussion. Not in my romantic stories. Flowery terms, please.
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Post by augiesannie on Jan 29, 2014 13:29:10 GMT
rose. daffodil. hydrangea. petunia. I'm all hot and bothered now. (actually I am more hot and bothered than by the anatomy lesson!)
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Post by utility_singer on Jan 29, 2014 15:20:01 GMT
Edelweiss, darling. You forgot the edelweiss.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2014 17:14:21 GMT
Edelweiss, darling. You forgot the edelweiss. So funny... but seriously, I for one aren't going back to that story. |
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Post by utility_singer on Jan 29, 2014 17:36:58 GMT
Yeah, don't think I will be either.
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Post by paula on Jan 30, 2014 5:40:56 GMT
Maybe I didn't read the whole thing. I was wondering what story so many of you didn't like. I'll go re-read it, but then, maybe I'm better off not reading it again! I think maybe I only read part of the first chapter, so that's why it didn't bother me.
Update: I just re-read the first chapter and it's not bad at all. I think I never got around to reading the rest of it and maybe I'll just leave it at that!
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Post by lemacd on Jan 30, 2014 5:53:28 GMT
the first chapter was actually quite lovely. i wouldn't really recommend the rest, either.
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Post by utility_singer on Jan 30, 2014 15:17:37 GMT
Paula, it seemed like it went from Romance Novel straight to a letter in Penthouse or Playboy.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2014 2:28:13 GMT
I just saw on ff,net that the story has been updated and the rating changed to "T" but nothing in the content of those vile chapters has changed (OK I was curious). Oh dear... it really should have been left as "M rated". Cringe.....
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Post by lemacd on Mar 8, 2014 2:46:47 GMT
i started reading it again because i guess i forgot the title (or she changed it... assuming it is a "she") and it was different but... then i looked at the reviews and they were the same for the M story, so... i was confused. and confused means i'm done with it.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2014 2:51:22 GMT
I'm just procrastinating with other stuff so I was on ff.net and I saw it and I remembered it but I just had to check when I saw the rating change. I'm like a child that sees a "wet paint don't touch" sign (or maria going into the ballroom when she has been told to stay where she was, but of course if she had, there wouldn't have been any of that door slammin' action, but i'm getting off topic).
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Post by lemacd on Mar 8, 2014 2:55:09 GMT
i cringed, then i laughed. then laughed, and then cringed. and then i think maybe i cried a little. then i laughed again.
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Post by utility_singer on Mar 8, 2014 2:57:39 GMT
Yes, I think the title was changed. I remembered the author, though, so I looked through and it was indeed the same. The same crass words, and another chapter that included an equally graphic description. No thanks.
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Post by lemacd on Mar 8, 2014 3:06:22 GMT
what was to be gained by changing titles and rating? weird.
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Post by utility_singer on Mar 8, 2014 3:44:58 GMT
I haven't the slightest idea.
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Post by augiesannie on Mar 8, 2014 13:28:34 GMT
that's a common thing people do, which is to leave M content in a chapter with a warning and then rate a story T so everyone can see it. I don't agree with that practice! I do think she probably toned down the newest chapter because of some of the feedback she got...
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Post by utility_singer on Mar 8, 2014 13:56:33 GMT
That scene on the train wasn't very toned down.
I obviously don't have a problem with M content, and I struggle sometimes with not making things too graphic. There's just something about the word choices of this author that makes it squicky, not sexy.
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Post by lemacd on Mar 8, 2014 14:03:11 GMT
Squicky?
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Post by utility_singer on Mar 8, 2014 14:21:32 GMT
Icky and squirmy, and not in a good way.
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Post by augiesannie on Mar 8, 2014 15:19:52 GMT
squicky. perfectly onomotopoetic.
My comment about toned down referrred only to the new chapter.
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Post by utility_singer on Mar 8, 2014 17:51:16 GMT
Ok. When I looked there were 2 more than the last time, the one on the train was new to me as well.
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Post by lemacd on Mar 8, 2014 18:38:58 GMT
the chapter about the train... it haunts me.
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Post by mie779 on Mar 8, 2014 20:38:40 GMT
Well now you got me curious... abandoned the story awhile back... will I or will I not read it....  hmmm |
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Post by lemacd on Mar 8, 2014 21:43:46 GMT
let me clarify... it haunts me like a dream about food poisoning.
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Post by mie779 on Mar 8, 2014 21:59:11 GMT
o,O okay.... NOT read then  thanks for clearing that up for me  |
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thanks for clearing that up for me 